Tuesday, October 16, 2007

I don't have a title yet! :(

Hey this is a story I made up. I hope you like it!!!!



Chapter 1


The sea air blew on me, calming my mind and thoughts. My dog Skamp ran a little ahead of me as I walked on the hard wet ground. "Why was everyone so mean to me?" I thought flicking a grain of sand off my hand. I pulled on my short red bangs trying to pull them over my eyes. I knew I was sort of an outcast with my non designer gray sweatpants and my huge torn up multicolored sweater.

The wind blew a little more urging me forward. Some of the wind got into my mouth and tasted like a fresh batch of frenchfries. My dog was happily playing in sea water splashing and chasing the fish. The clouds split a little apart casting a white light on the water.

My dog stopped splashing and ran out of the water as fast as his legs could carry him. "Must have seen a shark," I said aloud jokingly. I looked towards my feet and saw a beautiful white seashell, that looked as if it had been bleached from the seawater. I pulled the shell up to my ear and heard the sounds of the sea. Carefully I stuffed the delicate shell in my pocket and continued on my way.

My dog ran up to me wagging his tail. He put his paw on my knee and turned his head towards the bank as to coax me to follow him.


To be continued....

2 comments:

raelani said...

There is a lot of detail in this story. I thought it was good because you felt like you were there.

tommy said...

Your story had really good description because you showed the reader about the setting on the beach. Nice Job!